shaenon: New Smithson!

Shaenon K. Garrity (

shaenon) wrote,
@ 2007-09-06 16:55:00

Entry tags:

overlooked manga festival, smithson

New Smithson!
Well, kind of. Brian and his wife Meg are on a cross-country train trip, so this week he just posted some bonus pencil sketches. Consider this an opportunity to go through the archives and catch up on the whole thrilling story.

www.smithsoncomic.com

Brian and Meg breezed through San Francisco this week, so I got to meet up with them and talk way too much about comics. They toured both the beautiful Cartoon Art Museum and my own wretched, manga-choked apartment, and then they no doubt vowed to get away as quickly as possible and never come back. Also, they brought me cookies!

Oh, and I certainly hope you didn't miss this week's Chronicles of William Bazillion!

One more thing: thanks to everyone who sent me kind words about last week's Edward Gorey pastiche. I drew it strictly for my personal entertainment, and I was bowled over that other people enjoyed it. It turns out that when you combine two things nerds like, such as Star Trek and Edward Gorey, they really dig it! Who knew?

Okay, time for a quick Overlooked Manga Festival Special Event!

OMF Special Event:
Top Ten Lines from the Excel Saga Manga

Credit should be divided between creator Rikdo Koshi, translators Dan Kanemitsu, Pookie Rolf, and Yuko Sawada, and rewriter Carl Gustav Horn.

10. Excel and Hyatt on choosing an impenetrable alias:

9. Dr. Iwata on invasive surgery:

(Small text: I'll do it like this...I'll do it like that...I'll do it with a Crile hemostat! Note also the inclusion of a Jack Chick-style HAW HAW!, a recurring feature in the English-language Excel Saga.)

8. Excel on the resemblance between an army of robot duplicates of Hyatt and the steampunk technology of Galaxy Express 999:

7. Iwata on why it's presumptious for androids to suggest expensive restaurants for lunch:

6. Elgala and Excel on getting drunk and cooking the dog:

5. Excel on the difficulty of escaping from prison:

4. Excel on the best way to befriend a new coworker:

3. Excel on the train that ran over her crude homemade flying machine, ACROSS-Star One:

2. The Manager (who, for reasons unknown, speaks in a thick German patois) on the time Dr. Shiouji's top-heavy mad-scientist mother won an eating contest at her okinomiyaki stand:

1. And a labor of love...Dr. Shiouji on the accidental deletion of hundreds of gigabytes of (mostly underage) pornography:

Thank you. That is all.

Previous Overlooked Manga Festivities:
Basara
Please Save My Earth
From Eroica with Love
Even a Monkey Can Draw Manga
Dr. Slump
Your and My Secret
Phoenix
Kekkaishi
Wild Act
Knights of the Zodiac
The Drifting Classroom
OMF Special Event: Manga Editors Recommend Manga, Part 1
OMF Special Event: Manga Editors Recommend Manga, Part 2
OMF Special Event: Manga Editors Recommend Manga, Part 3
OMF Special Event: Great Moments in Manga Baking
Shout Out Loud
Monster
Swan
Warren Buffett: An Illustrated Biography of the World's Most Successful Investor
Sexy Voice and Robo
OMF Special Event: 2006 Overlooked Manga Update
The Four Immigrants Manga
Gerard and Jacques
Ode To Kirihito
Bringing Home the Sushi
Banana Fish
Skip Beat
OMF Special Event: The Greatest Manga Magazine in American History
Cyborg 009
Anywhere But Here
To Terra
Town of Evening Calm, Country of Cherry Blossoms
Doing Time
The Walking Man
Sugar Sugar Rune
Parasyte
Japan as Viewed by 17 Creators
Mariko Parade
Golgo 13
Ricca 'tte Kanji!?
Pure Trance
OMF Special Event: My Legacy
OMF Special Event: An All-Star Tribute to Carl Gustav Horn
Guest OMF by Jason Thompson: 888
JoJo's Bizarre Adventure
Tekkon Kinkreet
Yakitate! Japan
Flower of Life
Domu

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	klyfix 2007-09-07 03:29 am UTC (link)
	Maybe I'm weird, but now I'm wondering what manga versions of Chick tracts would look like.... (Reply to this)

	estara 2007-09-07 04:56 am UTC (link)
	Lovely bit of rewriting, I don't think you can call it translation any longer. However as a German, I would love for people who want to use the accent to actually construct the sentences the way we do or use idioms we would use: I expect he meant "Holz vor der Hütte" instead of "große Kiste", oh well. (Reply to this)(Thread)

	kelsied 2007-09-07 05:25 am UTC (link)
	As a total non-German speaker, what's the difference? Or is it translatable? (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

estara
2007-09-07 06:46 pm UTC (link)

You mean between "große Kiste" and "Holz vor der Hütt'n"?

Well the first translates directly as "big box" and the second means "to have a pile of firewood in front of the hut" ^^, so both have to do with wood. Maybe that's why the translation got messed up?

The rest is nonGerman sentence structure: e.g., we do use many "the", but those used are mostly in the wrong place.

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	*awestruck* kelsied 2007-09-07 05:37 am UTC (link)
	That's... wonderful. adds to wishlist (Reply to this)

	ajshepherd 2007-09-07 02:09 pm UTC (link)
	The thing from the Excel Saga manga that totally had me in stitches was Sumiyoshi as a geordie. That was inspired on the part of the translator! (Reply to this)(Thread)

	shaenon 2007-09-09 04:00 am UTC (link)
	I can't believe I got through the entire top ten list without a single Sumiyoshi line. There wasn't one that really jumped out as me, although, as I've mentioned in the past, referring to dating sims as "date-a-lass games" was inspired. (Reply to this)(Parent)

	sargent 2007-09-07 02:48 pm UTC (link)
	It turns out that when you combine two things nerds like, such as Star Trek and Edward Gorey, they really dig it! And should that bit of Star Trek be "The Trouble With Tribbles," so much the better. (Reply to this)

	erinfinnegan 2007-09-07 07:43 pm UTC (link)
	I bought the Excel Saga anime on sale and liked it well enough. I flipped through the manga in the store once but put it down... but if Carl Horn's involved, I might have to read it! D'oh! (Reply to this)

fooliv
2007-09-10 03:08 pm UTC (link)

You know, I loved Carl Horn's voice from back when he was more of a gonzo fanboy than a professional, but haven't really read any of his manga rewrites, and every time you go on one of these Horn-idolizin' tears... I can't say I'm sorry.

He's got too much personality to be doing this sort of thing - it overwhelms the actual material. Every line you excerpt sounds so much like Carl being Carl that it comes across more like a standup routine about the manga rather than the manga itself.

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klyfix
2007-09-11 03:31 am UTC (link)

That would seem to be something of an issue with any "localization" or whatever of Manga, I would expect (confession: I don't read that much of it although I should). Beyond a certain point you would have a new story attached to the original pretty pictures. Obviously there can't just be a word for word translation, and in some cases the real meaning might be best conveyed with Americanisms (anime example: In an episode of "Cowboy Bebop" "Black Bean Paste" becomes "a pudding.").

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	_w_o_o_d_ 2007-09-12 08:00 am UTC (link)
	Unrelated, but... Neil Gaiman just linked to your "Edward Gorey's Trouble with Tribbles" !! Neil Gaiman ! (Reply to this)

	uncreativity 2007-09-25 03:56 pm UTC (link)
	:D? Anyway, thanks for doing this! This really is an underappreciated manga. (Reply to this)

	Number three (Anonymous) 2007-11-23 08:30 pm UTC (link)
	Great list. I use #3's "You persons of illegitimate birth!" line all the time, even changing it to the singular 'person'. E^D (Reply to this)

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